Thursday, April 20, 2006

A Little Exercise

Occassionally, I do these little exercises. I got inspired looking at Hans Bacher's blog. He is just so amazing with screen composition and design. So I took a situation, a Western stand-off, and quickly did a few different ways to stage some of the action. There is no continuity in these thumbnails, I just put the camera around a few different places to see what kind of composition I could come up with and find out what kind of mood each one created.
That was the real goal, creating mood. I am against "cool shots" just for the cool factor. If you're just showing off your camera rig or your layout skills without regard to enhancing the story, you are wasting your time and distracting the audience. Cool shots work best when they enhance the mood of the scene.


No. I'm not working on a wetsern, I just picked this situation because it had an immediate conflict that I didn't have to set up. Again, I wasn't considering continuity or building a story, I just wanted to see where all I could place the camera and approximate lenses (some are very wide, some are long). I did all of these sketches pretty quickly. I tried to see how many I could do in an hour and how many of them I liked. (I'm not showing you all of them)

Now a single shot (or screen composition) can't create a mood as well as a series of shots. Like single chord in music isn't as effective as a series of chords. The same way a color standing alone looks diffferent than when it surrounded by either analogous or complimentary colors. Dramatic change (from shot to shot) creates more drama and tension. Try it sometime. Cut from three or four very flat, straight on shots to a strong 3-point perspective shot and feel the drama. Or try the opposite: create a scene from several dramatic perspectives, camara moves even, then cut to a very flat staging. The flat shot gets suddenly very dramatic because it stands out.

Oh, and go visit Hans Bacher's blog. You will be inspired. http://its-a-wrap.blogspot.com/

17 comments:

Aja B. said...

Just wanted to pop in and say that I love your blog! I'm a studying animatioin over at AnimationMentor.com, and your posts are always so inspiring. Especially now that we're starting on short film development, your thoughts on boards and layout are just fantastic to read. Thank you! :-)

MattG said...

Like Aja, I'm also at AnimationMentor.com and your blog is great to read. This post couldn't have come at a better time, as I was struggling through some storyboards last night. I will definitely be taking a lot more time now to experiment and try new ideas until I get the mood that I want for each shot. Thanks so much for all the inspiration!

Tim said...

Just remember, no "cool" shots just for the sake of being cool. Be clear first.
And clear doesn't mean boring, just clear.

haptown said...

Tim,
Nice storyboards.
I saw your comment on the blog I created for the Nashville Ukulele Society. I did not know about Jake's show but I'm glad that it has been re-scheduled (not good for you but pretty good for me). Either way you look at it we'll get another chance to see and hear him soon.
Send me an email and I will put you on the NUkeS mailing list (if you would like) and I will send you an e-reminder about the club meeting as the date draws near. My email is haptownstudio@gmail.com
This is only going to be a club in the loosest sense of the word - no dues, no club president or secretary, just people with ukes having fun. We will discuss moving the future meetings to a location where food and drink can be had - I have two good friends who own Caffeine Cafe and Bar on Music Row and they have offered to let us come in there and get rowdy with our ukes.
I look forward to seeing you on May 16th.
-Andy

Anonymous said...

How could I get A job at Big Idea, years from now?

Tom Bancroft said...

These are Sweeeet drawings my friend! I really like your staging on all of these! Keep up all the great work!

KyleTribbey said...
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KyleTribbey said...

Do know of any books on writing directing and compositing? Im intrested in this subject.

Tim said...

There are dozens of books on this subject. One of my favorites is "Film directing Shot by Shot" by Steven d. Katz. I also enjoyed Robert Rodriguez's "Rebel without a crew" and of course screenwriting guru Robert McKee's "Story" is probably the most read book on screenwriting.
All of these are available on Amazon, or drop by Barnes & Noble. They have a very good section on film.
Oh, and you might want to check out Bruce Block's "The Visual Story" I attended his three day seminar a couple of times. He is outstanding for anayzing all the visual components of film.

KyleTribbey said...

Thanks Tim,(can I call you Tim) Im a big fan of you and Phil Vischer and Mike Nawrochi.I will be realy thankful for those books you told me about because i have so many story ideas but not a real understanding of storywriting.

Tim said...

Yes, you may call me Tim. You can try calling me Randall, but I wouldn't recommend it. (And Myrtle is right out!)
Well, if you're primarily interested in writing, start with the McKee book (the other two are mostly about directing & shooting). You may also want to look at other screenwriting books by Syd Field. He explains things very clearly. (And frankly, I also like the "for Dummies" and the "for the Complete Idiot" books on screenwriting).
But again, drop by a bookstore or library and check out the entire selecion.
Oh, and download scripts from the internet for reference. (www.script-o-rama.com)

- T

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Thanks Tim.





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Ethan said...

Hey I was wondering if you were the same Melon as the Melon who animated the Beatles videos online. Could you e-mail me: HomeGrownIdeas@gmail.com and let me know please.
-Thanks, Ethan

Anonymous said...

Hey Tim,

These shots are great! I love your work. As a side note, you ever gonna finish that dream so we all can see? Just wondering.

A Nonny Mouse

sushipajamas said...

hey tim...are you still with us? havent seen a new post in ages...

lydia